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PostSubject: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:18 pm

Ok, i just felt like wirting something, because this thread was empty lol im not very good at writing but yet i still do it alot, maybe i will get better when im older, no on know's.

Well here's my Poem i dont have a title for it sorry, you can name it if you want.



Moment By moment i think of you
Breath By Breath i breathe for you
I can't sleep.
I can't Eat
I can't live
If i know i gotta live without you
So Please
Let us be
Let me see
And it will seet us free
Let's go to the clouds
Into the Sky
Beyond the Herizon
And over our reach
Let us go
Let us be
Cuz we are ment to be



Ok i got a title " let us be"


But i suck at writing poem's i prefer writing a song well a sng is a poem, but ummm nvm i make no sense.

Hope you liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:37 pm

aw that was cute..and yea i got a sense as i reading it that it would be better as lyrics to a song than a poem..but good work
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:50 pm

lol! Yeah i write song's more than i write poems i hardly ever write poems
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:11 pm

im more of a poems girl than a song writer. but im not that good at writing poems unless i have a lot of emotions i gotta get out..and im in the writing mood
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:15 pm

i loooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeee!!! it.........
so preTTy!!!
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem i Wrote   Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:22 pm

Hey guys check out I give up.. its a song
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