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PostSubject: I give up   Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:51 pm

Ok so here is a song/poem (idk) i wrote when i was 11 i think im not sure i was looking around and i saw it.


I tell you a lie, you believe
But yet the truth you decieve
I try to be the best i can
But still you wont take my hand
I want to follow all the rules you set
But i always seem to miss one step
My Desire is to make you proud
But within you form dark clouds


I have tried with all my heart
To make you believe
That i try
I have tried with all my strenght
To make you see
That i really care
I have tried with all my might
To make you feel like you belong
I have tried with all my heart, my strenght, my might my mind and soul just to make you know
But now im empty so i give up

I give up on making you believe
i give up on making you see
I give up on making u feel
Cuz i gave you all i had so now im empty


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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:53 am

awww...i loove it..
you have talent..
u wrote that when u were 11..
chick when i was 11 i was
playing marbles in the backyard..lol
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:11 am

I Love marble's, i used to collect them.
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:25 am

omg..i was the champion..
i was hella good at it..lol
i used to loove the big fat ones..
those were awesome..
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 1:43 am

I loved the pretty one's.
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 2:54 am

lol.the pretty ones..
i also liked the different color ones.
those were cool..totally..
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:47 am

tongue
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:36 am

braT!!
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:54 am

Were random we went from talking about my song to marble's like geesh cant we stay on topic for once. Oh and we need to make posts with r&b and Hip hop soon too, i think i will later on. king

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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:58 am

haha..i know..
ok.back to ur song/poem..
yeah it was awesome..lol
oh yeah..we need to do that..lol..
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PostSubject: Re: I give up   Thu Sep 20, 2007 2:04 am

Oo0o0o0o0Psss i kinda made it random again! my bad! No

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